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Friday, 17 April 2020

wonder writing

19.03.20 The house at the top of the hill hadn’t been visited for years People travelling in the in the middle of nowhere Until they find a Mountain with a house. They Climbed the mountain Until they got up the mounrain and they saw an old abandoned haunted house. It was skoopy and they were in the middle of nowhere to go so they went in the old haunted spooky house. When they all got in. The door Slammed By itself. They went back to the door But it was locked so then they had to go Upstairs and they saw a Terrified Ghost. So next they went downstairs and they pushed the door and it opend so they got away.
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2 comments:

  1. Mr Nua17 April 2020 at 12:09

    Hi Aisea
    Good work on keeping up with your work over the lockdown! I really liked reading your story this morning because you really let your imagination run wild. I was relieved to hear they got out of the house safely and that was my favourite part. One improvent you could think about would be your capital letters, they only belong at the start of sentences and at the start of names. Keep up the good work!!

    Mr Nua

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  2. Tyson Puru20 April 2020 at 15:03

    Hi Aisea,
    It was so nice to read your story I like how wild and scary your imagination is.An improvement to work on is always read your story just to make sure it makes sense before sending it.

    Tyson

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