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Saturday 10 July 2021

Guardians of the Galaxy

Guardians of the Galaxy Instructions: Watch our immersion movie. Think about the storyline, what is being said, and the different emotions the characters would be going through. Make sure to use descriptive language. Challenge: Write this scene—from beginning to end, all of the action in between. Gold: 4-5 paragraphs Silver: 3-4 paragraphs Bronze: 2-3 paragraphs Introduction: Who, what, when, where, why? StarLord was dancing And gamroa Told Them About The New Misson And Groot Came Too. When They Arrived At Earth They Asked Their Magical Compunter What Can You Tell Us About Planet earth? Their Magical Compunter responned Earth Has Many Dangers Around the world the humans Have Puluted The Earth. Starlord said WHAT! WHAT DO YOU MEAN!!!!!.... Star Lord Was Also Wonder Why They Have Puluted The Earth And what they did What happened first: StarLord Was Dancing To His Music, then soon gamroa came and said to starlord to Stop, And told StarLord About the new mission they had and groot came to What happened in the middle: Computer Said” Humans Have Turned Evil And Also Not Looking After Earth Also Leaving Old Opened Bar Packs And Leaving Old Stuff Also Ripped Ice Block Packs In The Ocean Not Looking After The Ocean…….. What happened next: Groot StarLord And Gamroa Were fighting Conclusion: Groot StarLord and Gamroa Went off to Investagate. And learn About Planet earth Start your writing here: →When StarLord Was DancingTo His Music Gamroa Told StarLord To Stop And Told StarLord About The New Mission To Do. Their Mission Was to Visit Planet Earth And Learn More About Earth And Als computer, and They Went off to Investagate. When They Arrived On Earth they used their Magical computer, they all Asked their computer they asked? What Can You Tell Us About Planet Earth:?? Compunter Responsed Yes i can tell you about Earth Earth Has Many Dangers Around the world the humans Have Puluted The Earth. StarLord Said WHAT! WHAT DO YOU MEAN!!!!!.... Computer Said” Humans Have Turned Evil And Also Not Looking After Earth Also Leaving Old Opened Bar Packs And Leaving Old Stuff Also Ripped Ice Block Packs In The Ocean Not Looking After The Ocean…….. Then All Of A Sudden A Scary Person With a Mask Apears, She Says I'm Here To Save The Earth From Humans,Groot Gamroa And StarLord Said We Will Not Let You Destroy Humans… Then They Started Fighting.. In a bit until The Person Hit Groot: There Was Only Gamroa And Starlord Was Left To Save The Humans…. When They Were Still Fighting They Finally Got Her… Starlord Said To Gamroa Lets Take Her To The galactic Prison on Mars, gamroa Said Great Idea!. The End.

Friday 9 July 2021

June Writing Sample 2021


Start your writing here:


→On A Day Like This, on Thursday I Felt Excited To Go On A Rocket All The Way To Space,  this Was Going To Be My First Time And I Put On my Space gear, a Few Days Later We  arrived To  Space I Was Very Excited To See The Planets And All The Bright Stars Travelling Through Space It Was Fun,  In about an Hour or two my Rocket suddenly stopped working. I was feeling uneasy to find out what was going to happen to me.. Am I going to be stuck forever..? I was thinking if I could  fix The Rocket, after hours of fixing  the rocket's engines it began to work again and smoothly. I was relieved to see it once  again, so I set my destination to Mercury for a little stop to take a tour. Soon after a while I reached my destination, on Mercury I heard a deafening shriek. Horrifying thumps, I was startled and immediately froze, what was coming? Soon an Army Of Aliens and Giant Robots were coming my Body felt cold and I got shivers. I felt the planet's surface shake, the robots were marching at a rapid speed towards me while aliens were sprinting like Usain Bolt towards me! I got back to my senses and began to sprint back into my Rocket but Suddenly before I could even react they all started shooting the Rocket and an emergency alarm rang! My heart jumped out of my chest. I felt even colder, my Rockets engines were busted so I had absolutely no chance of getting out of this !!WARNING. WARING. ROCKET SHIP EXPLODING IN.. 10..9..! I quickly got a warm jacket to help me last for a while and I jumped out as it exploded faking my own death. I hid until the coast was clear and searched the planet for spare spaceships. Four Hours Later Lucky I found a spaceship that seemed to have been left behind, I used this as an opportunity to escape and return back to earth!